一个英语语法问题,求指教

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they might be impulsive to revenge on society, using a way that they learned on TV.

they might be impulsive to revenge on society, by using a way that they learned on TV.

第一句还是第二句是正确的?为什么?

they

impulsive

learned

revenge

15 replies • 2018-10-10 15:40:38 +08:00

EridanusSora

Oct 9, 2018 via Android

https://english.stackexchange.com/questions/217815/what-is-difference-between-using-and-by-using
？

Jimmyluo6

Oct 9, 2018 via Android

我觉得第二个

SeanITex

Oct 9, 2018

因为有逗号，所以第一句就好，简明扼要。

asdf123101

Oct 9, 2018 via Android

第一个，第二个要把逗号去了

Bryan0Z

Oct 9, 2018 via Android

语感是第一句对的

Oct 9, 2018 via Android

第一句是对的。如果要用第二句，除了要把逗号去掉，还要去掉 using

markx

Oct 10, 2018

语法的话，好像两个都没错。第二个就有点重复，因为 by 和 using 都是说如何 revenge。

另外个人感觉是，两个好像都有点怪。一般好像不说 use a way，不知道这个是不是中式英语的说法。

wohenyingyu03

Oct 10, 2018 via iPhone

in a way as ...
Using a way that 简直等于中文普通话……

valentin508

Oct 10, 2018 via Android

@Tumao727

palesaint

Oct 10, 2018 via Android

imitating what they had learned on TV or in the same way as they had learned on TV

Tumao727

Oct 10, 2018 via iPhone

@valentin508 楼上已经解决了呀。不考虑别的，单纯从句法上看，第一句独立主格结构，没问题。第二句去掉逗号也没问题。

LeungV2

Oct 10, 2018

计划学英语的我瑟瑟发抖。。。

mortonnex

Oct 10, 2018

@EridanusSora
@Jimmyluo6
@SeanITex
@asdf123101
@Bryan0Z
@to
@markx
@wohenyingyu03
@wohenyingyu03
@valentin508
@palesaint
@Tumao727
@LeungV2

昨天找外教看了下,第二种是正确的

结合
@EridanusSora 这个链接来看,第二种是完全没问题的,第一种逻辑上 "使用电视上学到的东西" 和 "冲动报复" 并不直接构成方式关系

但是"However, in today's popular culture, they basically mean the same thing"

Tvan

Oct 10, 2018 via iPhone

感觉可以换种写法:

They might impulsively use what they learned on TV to revenge on society.

kljsandjb

Oct 10, 2018 via iPhone

第一个正确